Oh, thank you for commenting. It’s tough to mix ones own work, esp with these limits. Also, it’s so challenging, for me anyway, to comment back - since don’t want to be misunderstood in anyway, and wind up over explaining - my ocd-ism : ) lol!
Your analysis is great to read - with so much there about how “we” *all can approach stuff - (and for me, relate it back to “me” - what to do).
- You comment about Deutsche made me think and look and came up with some funny stuff, imo:
- Alles hat ein Ende, nur die Wurst hat zwei (well, not a word, but a phrase)
It’s an interesting literal language, so specific - was a requirement at one time in order to “major” in math - I understand.
An Austrian relative (spoke English and Russian/Ukrainian too), first time in the USA I had to warn that she did in fact sound rude, but was not; then said in response, I’m not! rude (?!). Yes, I said, but you will sound rude with your Austrian-American sentence structure. Add in that she was 19 yo, stunning - and it made for interesting entertainment to watch her in social situations : ) lol!!! omg… (Some say, they all sound like they’re mad at everyone : ) ) … anyway… I digress… - I have a cold, am on cold-meds so, this is “that” in part, ocd w/o a filter : )
I kind of got lucky in ad ho process of this, in the moment, maybe? - to consider, I can’t do this as a 5 min track. Heck, I didn’t want it this long, and was shooting for a 3 Verse, 2 min “demo” of only core lyrics.
I noticed he jumped to (if accurate, per “that” performance) 7 lines from 6, then back. (He may not have? - didn’t “count” time - he may have “double timed” it - my answer to my Julliard Pianist when accused folks of 6 beats in a 4/4 measure : ) lol!! Anyway, I didn’t dive into it that deeply - just passing notice stuff).
- And, what I “did”, to me, looked like? - what I envisioned his first draft to be (if can image that w/o asking him). Often, some “producer” says - okay, good stuff, add more (?) more is better? Heck, with 3 verses, it’s 3+ min at that tempo.
Yes, imo too - it does not or should not “copy” the original. “Hey Joe” - when JH covered it, and etc., others… Led Zep, when covered “When the Levy Breaks”… and again, etc. other.
I’m not a “fan” -fan of Led Zep, but when I"ve heard some live bands cover their versions live - they’re “great” tracks/songs.
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Risking going on to long here…:
This makes me think back to, as a kid when I said to anyone, “teach me to solo” and was handed a Circle of Fifths… “wtf?” : ) (apologies hahh…)… I’m like 12 yo ish… or then shown a Keyboard, or “patterns” (now the full pentatonic map is everywhere in total an “is” a real thing that show many connections - octaves, triads, connections, flips to major/to minor/to modes - making no Note “wrong” in a context or any as a passing tone (if explained that way - most often is not as I’ve observed it).
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So, what was missing? A hook/melody. One day, I hear a “solo” - I’ll say “mocking” the lyrics and the bulb went on. Yes, without a “melody”, it’s just a scale.
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It sounds “idiotically” simple to comment - I have no fear in that regard : ) lol! However, no one *DID! : ) hahhh… and it “sounded” like a scale, not a solo; or “plugged” in gimmicks. (like Tapping unless really serves the song)
However, as some “lecture” - e.g., at a “blues” jam - folks are going to expect to hear “certain” riffs/licks; moreover, with only 5 - 7 Notes, there’s only so many anyway : )
- Yet, we don’t get bored or it sounds repetitive it seems?
But I do remember E. Clapton commenting he would “wonder” (“feared” on stage) how many folks heard him repeating the same old stuff - or similar words. Eh, it’s a different context (every track is a different container) - I think explains it ? or what I think when am seeking it. Why does sugar (arguably) taste good in Coke, and better in Chocolate? Same sugar.
Recently a bunch of E. Clapton Ai live stuff popped up, very obscure and - wow, it’s almost “embarrassing” ? (so to speak) how he starts… “running the neck” in penta-form, “feeling” his way into the grove moment, takes minutes (long time on stage : ) lol!!) and then - all of a sudden even to his style of “shred” - pure picking, pull offs and hammer on’s since that pick can’t catch those - a “natural” “run”, as I call it. And, for/with him, it is that Lyric/Melody too… - he’s not relying 100% on “solo” skills like a Malmsteen may *have to (not knocking that, valuing it - just their realities maybe). I think I’d rather have the lyric/melody too since find oddly placed, syncopated, single Note Dynamics more interesting - and seems like what “sells” interest in folks listening, too.
But, we or I am getting to analytical I suppose. But, your comment, so full of depth - and succinct inspired this.
I think when I see the tiny elements that moved me ahead, I still get “excited”. But, it is different for all - so my moments won’t “matter” necessarily to anyone else. No matter how technically proficient one can be, then a Bach or Beethoven, BB King - will come along and just dilute all of “that” - and shift it too breaking the box with a “simple”, 3-note melody.