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I do like the way Morrissey writes/wrote. It feels different and good to open with one or two lines and then have an instrumental moment. You build the strum well. It captures the intensity of that hammer slam and the anticipation from section to section in the song. Nice shift to the strum on “and when you’re standing on my fingers.” Your sort of musical denouement at the end of the song is also effective. Well done!
I don’t know this song, but based on your stellar performance, I’ve decided I like it! 
I don’t know enough musical theory or instrumentalism to give you specific technical feedback like NewUke can; I’m just here to cheerlead. 